one seamless joy
compared to an unmatched wonder.
the weight of one
counters the other.
and the victory,
albeit brief,
develops as a figment,
in receeding flight,
to dissolve into the incumbent flow.
10.03.2006
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7 comments:
whoa.
katie's comment shouldn't count!
i still don't totally understand this, but i see what you were saying about it not really being a happy poem. Not sure about the last line...what were the other things you were considering again?
cheer up.
i say one word and it shouldn't count?
so now we're supposed to break this thing down and analyze it?
i'm sticking with whoa, and it counts.
*giggle*
It's about time to update, just so you know.
thanks for the reminder
seriously...update.
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